Rough Cut FeedBack

Positives=
Good angles and camera work. :)
Impressive shot through the center of the buoyancy aid (Red ring)
Good choice of location
Excellent camera work
Very sexy singer- 'haha- we love Pryor.'
Nice shot angles
Very Good!
Good Camera work..
Nice opening - blend from seagulls and waves to the sounds of instruments.
This was the overview of our positive feedback comments...

Negatives=
Lip syncing is slightly out at 11.25.
Needs more of a story to it.
"Hoodie bit" seems a bit out of place.


We feel that the feedback we received from our rough cut is very impressive and we now know what we need to do, to complete our music video to our best ability.

Rough cut

We have now finished are rough cut and are quite happy with out video so far.
We have still got a lot to put in and still quite a lot of song to fill.

Things we will be trying to achieve over the next few weeks.

- We will try to complete the whole song as there is only a part of the song in our rough cut
- We may have to film so more footage for our video as there is a long part of the song which James did not sing.
- We still need to smooth over the first bit of the song and make sure all the cut and fades are in time and perfect