Rough Cut FeedBack

Positives=
Good angles and camera work. :)
Impressive shot through the center of the buoyancy aid (Red ring)
Good choice of location
Excellent camera work
Very sexy singer- 'haha- we love Pryor.'
Nice shot angles
Very Good!
Good Camera work..
Nice opening - blend from seagulls and waves to the sounds of instruments.
This was the overview of our positive feedback comments...

Negatives=
Lip syncing is slightly out at 11.25.
Needs more of a story to it.
"Hoodie bit" seems a bit out of place.


We feel that the feedback we received from our rough cut is very impressive and we now know what we need to do, to complete our music video to our best ability.